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" 青い珊瑚礁 " © Simon Mutschler

青い珊瑚礁 -> blue lagoon

5 Hours of work.

Wallpaper pack coming soon.
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Pretty good space art you made here! I really like the lighting on the planet, it's nice and subtly while still being crisp and sharp, especially the crescent on that planet.

Now what intriques me is the darkness and the starfield. There's almost no star and makes space look kinda flat and mainly empty. I think you should add some more stars and maybe a little bit of space gas that's very subtle to give it that nice, "out of this world" feeling.
Also I think you wanted to make a strong contrast between the lighting and the darkness of the piece, but it's really hard to see anything else than the lighting on the planet. I suggest maybe turning down the opacity of the shadow layer that's on top of your planet to maybe 90%? A lot of people seem to do that and it kinda ruins the rest of the texture of the planet.

In my opinion, it's a really nice touch to add when you can slightly see a part of the texture in the night side of a planet so it makes you wonder what could be going on down there and if people live there and what it's like.

Good job overall and keep it up, man! :D
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Unkn0wnArt1st Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2010
Yes, something is missing on the left, perhaps it makes sense to move the signature there :D
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Merwannn Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010
Awosme job :D
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pogona2009 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010
you have played pretty well with those blues, maybe in the left corner I would put another planet, I feel it empty, else is just great.
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SuperSmurgger Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Mega Awesome !!
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goodforn0thing Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thx!
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SuperSmurgger Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yw !
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MsPheonix Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2010
Wow, this is stunning. : o That's insane for just 5 hours of work!
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goodforn0thing Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :)
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animetoonz Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2010
This is so cool! Good job! :D
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goodforn0thing Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you.
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tadp0l3 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Distant planet = great
Close up = not so great - looks a bit flat :(

Really love the atmosphere settings though, great job!
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goodforn0thing Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! good critic point.
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MaG1Xx Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2010
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goodforn0thing Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:worship:
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